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〈街貓〉羅拔/羅拔翻譯
"Street Cats" by Rob Chen, translated by Rob Chen

We stop and stare at each other

I meow, he meows back
He meows, I meow back
I meow, he meows back
And silence

We pass by each other


我們停步相視

我喵，他喵回
他喵，我喵回
我喵，他喵回
然後靜

我們經過彼此

The "more normal (or conventional?) version" is below, also share with you all:

〈街貓〉羅拔/羅拔翻譯
"Street Cats" by Rob Chen, translated by Rob Chen

We stop and stare at each other

I meow, he meows back
He meows, I meow back
I meow, he meows back
And silence

We pass by each other


我們停步相視

我喵，他回喵
他喵，我回喵
我喵，他回喵
後沉默

我們擦身而過

我比較喜歡第二個版本，好像比較幽默一點。
問好ROBERT。

羅拔 寫:The "more normal (or conventional?) version" is below, also share with you all:

〈街貓〉羅拔/羅拔翻譯
"Street Cats" by Rob Chen, translated by Rob Chen

We stop and stare at each other

I meow, he meows back
He meows, I meow back
I meow, he meows back
And silence

We pass by each other


我們停步相視

我喵，他回喵
他喵，我回喵
我喵，他回喵
後沉默

我們擦身而過

Street Cats 中文是「野貓」，對嗎？

Street Cats 中文是「野貓」，對嗎？

翻做街貓也可以喔!

And silence

這個我會翻成"安靜了"，我覺得後沉默沒那麼貼近原意耶，大家覺得呢?

沈雨懸 寫:這個我會翻成"安靜了"，我覺得後沉默沒那麼貼近原意耶，大家覺得呢?

我覺得都OK。

大概是我很隨便吧。

哈哈。

感謝各位的意見，微修後如下：

〈街貓〉羅拔/羅拔翻譯
"Street Cats" by Rob Chen, translated by Rob Chen

We stop and stare at each other

I meow, he meows back
He meows, I meow back
I meow, he meows back
And silence

We pass by each other


我們停步相視

我喵，他回喵
他喵，我回喵
我喵，他回喵
後靜默

我們擦身而過